ristar fanfic-the shooting stars,ristar 2

[zeo]

i need to mention this now.i called the elder riho by error in the last part.you see,the boss of the first stage in Ristar was the leader of the planet,who had no name of his own.yet,the creture that controlled him in the game,a monkey-like thing,was called riho.now,its a common error,but people think that riho was the name of the elder.anyway,from now on he will be called "the elder" or "elder".
anyway,heres chapter 5!!
"Without any hesitation,the tumour driven elder attacked the 2 stars,blowing gust’s of razor sharp leaves all over the place.any attempt to get near him was failing,as he eiter doged or thwacked the heros with one of the tumours tentacles.
“alright,I’ve had JUST about enough of this!!” shouted out colstar.he waited for the elder to attack again.the elder charged at him with lightning speed,ready to pound colstar with his tentacles; however,at the very last moment,colstar jumped up,and imidietly droped down onto the elders back,knocking the tumour off.the elder fell to the ground,breathing,but apparently unconscious.the tumour was squirming on the ground nest to colstar.it tried to take control of colstar by leaping at his foot,but colstar stomped on it before it even got a chance.
“is…is he?” ristar asked worridly.
The elder got up,a drunken,confused expression on his face.it took him several seconds before he realised what was going on.he began to explain everything to ristar and colstar.
“im sure what exactly happened” the elder explained,” as far as I know,these little tumour things started taking control of my people,and soon managed to take control of me.im sorry we all attacked you,but we had no control over our rash actions.we hope you can forgive us,and we thank you for freeing us..” the elder said with gratitude.
“not a problem” colstar said “but we’d best get away from here and get you to safety before daddy evil-“
He was cut off by the sound a nerdish voice letting out a huge,echoing evil laugh.
“daddy evil…” ristar said with spite.sure enough,the flying chair descended onto the way overgrown grass.
“grrr.how dare you spoil the land with your putrid evil!!”colstar shouted,concentrated anger in his voice.
To eveyones surprise,daddy evil simply just clapped.incredibly slowly.
“im proud of you.” He said,to both colstar and ristar “you managed to take care of a controlled elder with his power earth magic.however,you think im going to let you get away with it.i don’t think so..” daddy evil cackled,raising his hand to the sky;shooting out 2 bolts of red lightning,turning the sky a dark shade of red.more mutated followers came out of the bush’s,plants,and trees surrounding colstar,ristar and the elder.forming a circle around them,allowing no escape.the 3 of them huddled together back to back,as the mutated followers closed in.
“you see,I don’t play fair,you pathetic stars.and you just walked right into my game!”
Daddy evil raised a glowing hand,and shot out a blast of black energy toward the ground in the center of the circle.it began to form a shape.a shape like a giant,eyeless,toothy leach,almost sake-like.it was made out of pure energy.the crowed of mutants began chanting.
”all hail the master.all hail the master..”
It moved around the 3 in the center,stopping at the elder.all fo a sudden,he lept out,swallowing the elder whole,before either ristar or colstar cold react.
“elder!!!”
The snake-leech jumped out of the circle of mutants.afterward,the mutants advanced again on the 2 stars,still chaning.
“how are we going to get out of this one..” ristar asked his brother,his voice shakey and high-pitched.
“i…I don’t know..” colstar replied,a worried expression on his face.
However,at one end of the circle,a blast of a red light flung a few of the locals out of the way.it appeared to be the elder…however…his eyes where glowing a deep,blood red,letting out a low growl of anger.his skin was a dark red,his clothes black,shredded,and a similer evil aurora to that of daddly evils surrounding him."

[CommanderEVE]

ohhhh... i wonder what is going to happen, it's getting cooler.

[zeo]

Chapter 6

Daddy evils nightmarish,nerdy laughter echoed throughout the empty woods of flora.like it or lump it,colstar though,daddy had won this round.
“you have no chance againt me.i don’t even know why your bothering,to be honest” he said,while taking out an old smoking pipe,seemingly fron nowhere.
“you see,there are 2 types of people in this world…those who get what they want..and those who are to pathetic to try and reach it and think about everyone else and forget about themselves.I am the latter..” daddy evil explained,taking a few puff’s from his pipe.
”bassicly what your saying is you’re a greedy,moraless dictator with a pessimistic view to a galaxy you don’t see fit,thus you are rebuilding its building blocks by wiping out what you don’t like and changing everything to your own liking and forcing others to follow in your reign.” Colstar said,in a incredibly scientific tone.
everyone just stared at him,even the mutants and the evil elder,with surprised looks.
ristar slapped his forehead.
”what?!” colstar proclaimed
“this,is a videogame with a not-to serious tone.try to keep it that way,you moron!” ristar said rather angry.
“graaaaah! Enough of this stupid nonsense,elder,attack!!”
”at once,master..” sneered the elder,in a much more threatening tone then his normal voice.
The elder began to conjour a tornado,witch sucked up all of the razor sharp leaves from earlier,throwing them about madly.he began releasing smaller tornados,heading straight for the 2 stars.ristar began flinging himself and launching himself in an attempt to doge all the tornados,while colstar flipped about here and there.the tordnados however,where strong enough to break all their escape points and doging ground.now all they where left with was bare ground,and that was no good.they tried attacking the elder.ristar tried to propel himself towards the elder in his trademark headbutt attack.however,this was proving problematic,as ristar needed to grab the elder first,and everytime he tried to grab him,a tornado would hit him and throw him off course.colstar tried the same with punching him,but he realised there was no ground to even get close to daddy evil.he tried none the less,after all,he could jump pretty high.however,even though he manedged to get on the,surprisingly solid master twister the elder was on,he would blast him with his trademark energy petal attack.however,they didn’t flash their useual happy colors,and flashed between dark red,light red,black,white and a dark,deep blue.
“theres no way of attacking him,colstar!!” shouted ristar. “theres nothing we can do,we’ve failed!!”
”ristar, how many times have you said that today,for one thing,and for another,don’t give up!” colstar called back.
He knew the only thing he could do was try his psyche power.he began powering himself up,and aimed his fist at the elder.he noticed the elder shifted slightly,full of surprise,but he soon regained balance.however,he forgot about attacking and focused on breaking free of colstars grip.the 2 of them struggled,colstar feeling most of the strain.the elder moved a couple of times,but not very far.colstar began to groan,the pain was becoming greater.he could hear the elder groaning,but only from the struggle to remain still.soon,colstar began to moan in agony,worring his brother.
“colstar,you’ve got to stop!!”
“n-n-no..i w-wont st-st-s-stop until I b-bring him down!!”
Finaly,colstar roared in agony,his head was screaming in pain,his hands where burning,and his legs where getting tired.suddenly,all of the pain went away,he felt normal again,as if nothing had happened,at all.and he noticed the elder could’nt stop squirming.colstar focused a little more,yet,the strain still didn’t incress.however,it seemed the elder was in a huge pain.he began rapidly flashing,changing from his normal,good self,to his evil self,pretty slow at first,but it began to speed up,every so often,he would also turn into that odd snake-like leech thing that consumed him and turend him evil.until eventually,the thing blasted out of his chest.because the snake was made of energy,it made no visably cuts or breaks,and simply passed through the molecules of his ribcage.the elder was now fully back to his normal self,looking weary.the tornado that he was riding had now fully desapated,and he fell to the floor.he crawelled over to a rock nearby and rested against it.
“ristar,go check on him.see if he is okay.” Colstar said to ristar.ristar nodded and jogged over to the elder.colstar tured to the thing on the ground,it was squirming and pulstatic,and was abnormally smaller then it was earlier.he picked up the thing,threw it up in the air,and uppercutted it.it feel to the ground,in an obvious pain.tiny little explosions going on all over its body,sprawing liquid energy everywhere,until finaly fully exploding,sending a huge shockwave all over the planet,returning it to normal.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!” daddy evil screamed,watching the planet return to normal.
“grrrrrr,I’ll be back.you still have all the other planets to save,you pesky star-beings!!” shouted a furios daddy evil,as he retired to his chair,still smoking the old English styled pipe,and left the planets atmosphear.
Later,during flora’s sunrise,there was a small celabration going on in a huge plain on flora.colstar and ristar where just leaving for leatow.
“once again,we cannot express our gratidude to you,ristar,and colstar” the elder with a smile under that huge mostache/beard of his.”and how sorry we are that we attacked you!” piped up a loclal.
“no,WE should be the ones apologizing.” Said ristar,blushing “we’re sorry we had to attack you…”
“yeah,” colstar said,blushing also “sorry about that…”
“ah,no need to worry,you did what you had to do..” the elder said,still with that happy expression “and im sure the bruises will heal,in a few days” he said,with a slight laugh.
“well then” ristar said to colstar “we’d best be off to save the other planets!” ristar,with a smirk on his face.
“yeah!” colstar said
“very well..” the elder said,conjouring 2 star-swings for the both of them “we hope to see you again,someday..”
As ristar and colstar left,a chourus of goodbyes from the planets populous grew fainter as they sped towards leatow.

[CommanderEVE]

poor daddy evil, Ristsr and colstar have alot of planets to save thats going to make it better and funner to read and i wonder if Planet Delta was tooken over by daddy evil aswell that story is great maybe the best i've read it's realy got me interseted

the other guy should read this story

[zeo]

i'd PM the thread to them,but that'd be kinda rude.
hmmm...well,for cameo reasons,i COULD say that planted delta is in the zoran galaxy if you wanted.'might take a while to get there,though.

[CommanderEVE]

yeah ok that would cool