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Endgame-"something bugging you?" written

Postby zeo » 19 years ago

(could'nt help myself from doing a wirrten version,as im not really in a drawing mood right now ^^; and as a warning note,that title right there is THE biggest pun ever <.< ;)

prolouge
Metro City
01:02 A.M.
wesday, june 19th
The entire city is envaloped in flames, chaos. and destruction. the once normal populace of the city had become shambling,pink-sinned...i guess,for lack of a better word,zombies.hard to belive just some 24 hours ago the city was normal.
i was standing at the edge of a tall biulding somewhere in central city, looking down below on what was left of metro city...
i turned to asto and crono, who were sitting behind me.
"...as far as i can tell, we're the only ones left.." i sighed."...everyone else we know has become one of those mindless drones that do the dirty work for those giant bugs."
"then what are we going to do?" crono asked.
"...we dont have any other alternative...we have to fight them." i replied sadly.
"no way gyro, there has to be another way! we cant just fight the people we swore to protect!" astro shouted angrily to me.
"take a good look astro. those ARE'NT the people we vowed to save.the mutent bugs have seen to that.they're nothing more then zombies,shadows of they're former selves,completely focused on destruction,nothing more."
"but...we cant just-"
"astro,if we dont deal with this now,then there will be NO world to save anymore, the army have done a good enough job holding them in the city for as long as they have. we cant just keep running. if we do,we'll just run out of places to run!"i said, smashing the ground out of rage.
"...he has a point" crono said,"we cant just turn a blind eye on this."
"it does'nt matter how many we take down,guys, the queen will just keep laying eggs, creating more mutents that can lay eggs themselves,it will be a neverending army!" astro said.
"then our mission is simple-take out the queen." i said."..we might need to battle through a million-or-so monsters...but its not about us anymore,if we fail, the world can pretty much kiss itself goodbye."
without another word,i turned and leaped from the biulding,astro and crono following, into the streets below, catching many of the drones attention. i wasted no time into laying into them with rapid punch's and kicks, knocking one-after-the-other back.

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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

Yeah that is really cool, I’d love for you to continue. And like the way you have short chapters because it's earlier to read. I like the way the cartoons jumped down and attacked there foe with rapid kicks. :D

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

(thanks sparx ^.^ hopefully soon this should be a comic as well)

chapter 1
24 hours earlier...

it was pretty much a normal day. astro,crono and i where walking home from school for a change,rather then flying.
"you know,its suprising-" i said,rather out of the blue
"what?" astro asked
"suprising that theres not been a single bad guy attack for a while." i replied ",no Dr. ZeD,no Tenma, nobody...".
"dunno why your complaining about it" crono said with a smile.
"i just have a feeling that something bads gonna happen..and a lot of the time,im right."
"nah,i doubt it,theres nothing to- hey,whats that big white thing by the biulding there?" astro said, pointing close-by to a strange, white ball, stuck to the biulding.
i ran up to it to check it out, astro and crono behind me.
"..its....some kind of ...egg?" i said, out of suprise.
i leaned closer to get a better look at it. something inside, like and arm, poked out, almost hiting me squre in the face.
"what animal has an egg like that?" crono asked "it looks more like a...insect egg." he said,suprised.
"your right." i said, startled. "come on,we'd better take this to dr. elefun right away."
i began tugging at the egg,trying to pull it away from the white stuff keeping it plastered to the wall.after prying it free, we took off into the sky, headed straight for the minestry of science.
"this,is definetly weird" i shouted over to them over the sound of the wind we where flying against " theres no know bug that has an egg this big...unless you count giant millapieds, but they're lo-o-ong gone now!"
"gyro,look!" crono said, ointing to the gg in my hands.
i looked down at it. whatever was inside it was convulsing, like it was hatching.
we stopped in midair,and landed on the groud to check out what was inside it.
completely to my suprise, the thing stoped moving.a slight squelching sound could be heard.
"i dont like the looks of this.." i said, kinda worried.
without warning, the front of the silky egg burst, the creture inside latching around my face. i maneged to yank the thing off and got a better look at it.
i could'nt belive what i was seeing. it was a spider-a jumping spider to be exact,but it was definetly NOT one of the squishable variaty. the thing was almost as big as me!
without any hesitation, astro lunged foward and punched the thing square in the face.it might have been giant, but the spiders tissue was still easily penatratable. its face imploded on astro's impact,spraying me and crono with some horrid orenge stuff.it was almost like glue.
"...can somebody explain to me WHAT just happened?!" astro said,suprised.
"my guess is the bugs around here have had some stimulants or something." i said prying at the gunky orenge stuff."eugh, when did insects have orenge glue for blood?! this stuff gnarleir then zeo's cooking!"
"we dont really have time for that now,gyro. just pick up the spider and we'll wash you up at the minastry."
"i hope so" crono said "i dont fancy the idea of being the worlds next fossalised bug substitue"

(yay! i know,the story starts kinda early,but meh, it takes a while to biuld up.also, for a mental note...spiders creep me out X( hence why i used one right here.oh,and if you dont get crono's last line, the orenge gunk-type-stuff,aka the mutent insects blood, looks almost like amber,the amber that prehestoric bugs are preserved in.)
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

>>>>"this stuff gnarleir then zeo's cooking!"<<<<

lol.

Thats a good story. Kepp it up.

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

heh,that was acctualy slander to gyro boys sister,zeo,rather then myself XD MY cooking is nice!!!...*crickets cherping* will someone shut that cricket up! *yin yang yo For The Win*
either way,on with the show!
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At The Ministry.

dr. elefun and astro where studying the corpse of the giagantic spider "remarkable!" dr. elefun said "how could such an insect exist?"
"EHEM!" gyro cleared his trote loudly.
dr. elefun looked behind him at gyro and crono, still covered in the orenge gunk.
"and what happened to you two?"
"this was the result of astroboys 'heroic' attack with slayed the mighty beast.the things blood squirted out at us like a fountain!"
astro giggled nervously
"i was wondering where that horrid smell was comming from. astro,take them home and get them showered and cleaned up. i'll study the insect.i'll contact you if i make any discoveries."
gyro,crono and astro left the room,while dr. elefun continued to study the huge bug.
"hmm...i dont belive this-"
dr. elefun quickly pressed the intercom button
"ms. yuko, could you put me on line with chairman lion, he has to know about something very importent,imidietly!"
he didnt notice the 3 white,silk-like eggs plastered to the wall next to a set of shelves.

Astros Bedroom
"why has'nt he called yet?" gyro said, pacing back and forth. crono was sitting on the floor,leaning against astro's bed, while astro lay on top of the bed."its been 2 hours already.it cant take that long to study an insect,mutent or not!"
"mabey he didnt find anything" crono said.
"i doubt that highly.there has to be an explination for that-"
gyro was cut off as uran and zeo walked into the room,worried expressions on their faces.
"what is it?" astro asked.
"you all need to get down to the ministry of science,now." zeo said."come and look at the news"
all 5 of them walked downstairs to view the TV.

'and todays top story, following the appearence of giant insect eggs,about 500 where found lying inside the ministry of science just 1 hour ago. most of them where already empty. a scan of the airducts shows that their are about 1000 bugs hiding in the airways. authoritys have tried to gain accsses to the biulding, but the door has been sealed shut buy what can only be described as a giant silk-worm web,suprisingly very strong and hard to cut through or burn with lazers. with the discovery of more of these eggs around metro city, we are encouraging citizains to evacuate the city while and investigation goes underway.'

"oh man!" gyro said
"no wonder dr. elefun didnt contact us, he's in danger!" astro said.
"you have to get over there,now!" zeo said.
"but what about you,uran and kina? you'll be defenseless if these things come after you!" crono said.
zeo steped foward, revealing a lazer cannon in her right arm.
"i might not be as strong as my brother, but i can still put up a good fight!" she said.
"yes,well,just be careful, we dont know just how serious this is yet." crono said.astro,gyro and crono left in the direction of the ministry.
"what now?" uran asked.
"i'll check around,see if theres any of those creepy cralwies dweeling around here!" zeo said, pointing her cannon out in front of her.
inside the closet of urans room,3 white eggs where plastered on the side wall. a spider-like arm punched its way out of the egg, feeling around for any potential food.

(DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUN!! its getting juicy now,eh? XP oh,and in case you dont know,kina is crono's sister,and she is a human,not a robot,making her the one at the biggest risk in this situation.you'll understand as the story becomes clearer)
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

O.o I wonder what will happen.
And btw, super Zoran to the rescue XD; he has arm cannon now :cool:

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

acctualy,thats gyros siter,zeo,that has the arm cannon ^^; she's had it since i created her.but you've given me the idea to give uran (yes,im calling some charecters by they're old names <.<; ) an arm cannon further on in the endgame series (its not just one doujin,you know...)
i'll post some more a bit later tonight ^w^
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

Ok, thats cool i got it now.

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

okie dokie ^.^
and i STILL need to write the next part...gah O_O
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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

chapter 3-heading towards arrmogeddan(wow,overdone title time,ladies and gents :B)
the sun had already started setting over metro city, and even from a distence, the Minestry of Sceince looked like an apocolyptic warzone.
"oh man...we should've left before now.for all we know,it could be to late!" i said
just as we rached the ministry we stopped in mid-air to device a plan
"right,we need to figure out a plan.if the bugs in that biulding are anything like the spider we fought earlier,we cant just run in there willy-nilly.any ideas?"
"well,we need to clear the whole biulding out,we can just head straight for elefun" astro said."so its best we start at the bottom and work our way up.and no matter what,dont split up!"
"sounds like a good plan to me.how about you,crono,do you have anything to contribute?"
"yeah,dont look behind you" he said,"unless you like suprises."
i turned around regardless.oh,i was suprised all right. i mean,its hardly a normal occourence to have a 6ft. tall hornet speading towards you with its jaw open wide.
quite hastily,i dodged out of the way of the speading mutent,admitedly quite scared.
i never was to keen on hornets,or bees,or anything covered with yellow and black stripes...
without any hesitation, i activated the 2 mini-guns in my arms and blasted away at the mutent,blowing him to peices.
"and that,is how you exterminate" i said rather smugly.
"i would'nt go celabrating yet,'exterminator extrodinare'" astro said,pointing towards what looked like a rain-cloud.
"oh you've gotta be kidding me..." i said out loud.
it was'nt a raincloud. it was far from it.it was a speading group of mutent hornets.
there must have been thousends of them!
astro started shooting his arm-cannon at them, trying his best to knock them out of the sky,while crono shot his energy beams at them.
i'd started to take aim at them myself,but i had an annoying buzz in my ear.
someone was trying to contact me.
'gyro,come back to the house,we're in-*break of to static*'
it was zeo's voice.
"ive just got a call from back home,the girls are in trouble!" i said to the other 2.
crono turned to me, appearing to think for a moment.he turned to astro,who was still blasting away at the hornets.
"astro,can you hold of the hornets?"
"i'll give it a try" he said,still blasting away at them.
"right, you stay here and take care of the hornets, and i'll go get dr. elefun,and you,gyro,go back to the house and help the girls"
"what about splitting up?" i said,one of my eyebrows raised.
"does it look like we have a lot of a choice here?" crono said, turning around to head towards the minestry "just go!"
"right!" i said,turning away and activating my extra jets*, speading back in the direction of home.
if anything,i was more then happy to help the girls.
at least that way i could get away from the hornets..ugh.

(yes,the story is splitting up into 3 segments from here-on out. dont worry,the 3 will get back together again...or will they? MWUHAHAHAH *slaped* alright already,they will,sheesh!...
yes...gyro boy is scared of hornets/bees/wasp....you may comense teasing him now X3
now if you'll exscuse me, i've got some stuff to do...)
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