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Endgame-"A Nightmare in the Dark"-written

Postby zeo » 19 years ago

(yeah,another fanfic im afraid.but meh,i just could'nt help myself X3 as im working on the "Something Bugging You?" doujin right now,dont expect a comic of this for a fair while. P.S.,this is the effect me of listening to the Splatterhouse Songs...more then just nostalgia occours when i listen to songs sometimes...
the story is told from different charecters POV's,starting currently with gyro boy.)

even in this day and age,where science is so advanced that robots with emotions,brains and hearts could be made,people still have strong beliefs in the suppernatural.ghosts,monsters,scary things that go bump into the night...at first,i refused to belive in these events,until a trip to a certain mansion...
and it all began,with a mystirious computer screen interface....

"why did you call us here, Dr. Elefun?" i heard zeo ask. all of the current members of the freedom fighters where here.how dr. elefun got all their numbers is something i must remember to ask him about...and congratulate him for having that much patience.
he sighed "strange things are happening with metro utopia's computers. not just our highly advanced super-computers,but home computers,TV's,and even simple tele-com screens. they're being intruded by a mistirious interface..."
"so your telling me you've got a virus problem?" i said,a tad annoyed
"perhaps i'd better show you.heres what happened earlier when i was calling donaheiw*"
he pressed a button on the computer,as a recording showed up.
it appeared to be just elefun sitting there on the tele-com screen with the aformentioned proffesser donaheiw, when suddenly the screen of the tele-com began to fuzz with static,before long the screen went black. the sound of a faint,desperate moaning could be heard.almost as if from nowhere, a young girl,probebly in her early 20's,appeared on the screen in a torn white dress.her long,brown hair trailed down to behind her.her hands where in a position as if she was praying.
she spoke...
"help...me..."
she sounded desperate,and weak.
suddenly,completely without warning, a huge,rotten hand burst up from underneath her and pulled her down,her screaming echoing throught the room.admittedly,even for a recording, it was pretty darn freaky.
"...do you see? whatever this is,its beyond human controll."
i could'nt help but giggle."oh come on dr.,you cant honestly belive in that supernatural jargle,your a man of science!"
"i didnt,gyro,until that very moment. there are virus' witch may black,out screens and cut connections,but even in this age,no virus has evolved enough to be able to display such a message." he said.
the room blacked out,sening out a chorus of worried "oohs" and lots of mumbling.
i felt zeo latch onto my arm.
i forgot she was standing there...
"i really dont like this,gyro" she said,eyes darting left to right.
"'s probebly just a power-"
i stopped speaking,eyes growing wide. at the end of the room, stood the sillhouette of a figure. as it moved fowards into the light, i let out a gasp.
it was the girl from the recording.
"..or...mabey not.."
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

o.o this is good.

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the girl began to hover closer to the crowed,lots of frightened mumbling rivveting through it.
dr. elefun stared at the apperition in pure shock,like he recognized her.
"i know you!" he shouted."your-your- ezmarelda!!"
the girl lifted her head. her expression was gaunt and sad,definetly fitting for a ghost.
"help....me..." she said again in that same dead,emotionless voice.she tried reaching fowards,but without warning,a hge white light engulfed the room.when it had sub-sided,the girl was gone.
"dr. elefun..." harpy said,pointing one of her lazer-blasters at him "explain!"
the docter sighed,before sitting down,ready to explain everything.
"over 500 years ago,in the year 2006....the first tool-robot was created by a man know as dr. heart-cross. he and his beutiful wife sandy,and their daughter,ezmarelda,who was 17 at the time,where living in a mansion far from any city.however,not known to the general public eye,they had a stow-away living in their shed. dr. heart-cross' brother,who called himself Genie to avoid the authoriatys finding him.you see,Genie was a saddist, a psychopath,and a sckhitzophreniac,completely insane.he belive in the old ways of the occult,and beforedr. heart-cross hid him away for the sake of wanting protect family,he was a brutal serial killer of...well,virgin women.presumably for sacrafices.he had kept most of them preserved for 5 years,under the floorboards of his shed,constently injecting them with preserving chemicals. he was planning something big,but nobody,not even his brother knew. but it soon becam clear.he wanted to raise hell,for reasons people still dont know. he just needed one more virgin scrafice...and the only one close enough was his neice.he held no second thoughts or remose,and ultimatly decided to go through with it. he waited for to come how one night,hiding under the sofa with a knife and a bottle to drain the blood into. she walked in,trying to be as quiet as she could so-as not to wake her parents. she sat down on the sofa her uncle was hiding under. moment later he attack, stabbing the backs of her legs so she could'nt run away.he dragged her out to his shed,and finished the unholy job there and then. obviously hearing their daughters frightened shrieks,her parents had heard her assulted by her uncle,and ran out to the shed to kill him.he was already expecting this,however,as when dr. heart-cross ran into the shed in a blind fury,he ran face-first into an axe nailed to the cealing. the terrified mrs. heart-cross tried to escape back into the manion to call the authoriatys,but she never made it. genie shot her with a bowgun before she even made it to the door.
with all the blood he needed,and plenty of corpses,he draged everylast one into the huge mansion and placed them all over it. he activated the evil curse,and brought some-form of supernatural creture to life in the house,as well as re-animating the gutted/limbless/bloodless corpses back to life,hungry for flesh.he tried to leave,but he never made it out of the door, he was pulled back in. the strangest part,though,was that he burried his brother at the back of the house,and left ezmarelda and mrs. heart-cross in their rooms,completely lifelss.nobody knows why,but that was all that was left. authoriatys went to check it out-never came back. millions of campers/mindless kids have gone in their to prove they're bravery.never come out agian either.the goverment is to afraid of what might be in there,so they just leave it well enough alone." dr. elefun finished talking.
pretty much all of us where in total shock,afraid,and felt naughsious. this man was so sick and twisted,he killed his own family to achive a empty dream? it makes no sense to me at all.
"why are you telling us this"a nervous crono asked.
"well,im going to send you all over there post haste.the place was known for being haunted for over 500 years,but has never interfeared with the outside world.now that it is,this can only mean trouble" dr. elefun said. "BIG trouble."
all of us burst out in frightened gasps and angry shouts,understandably.
"your mad,completely mad!" i shouted out. zeo was cowering next to me.
"you cant be serious" she said,terror stricken.
"oh im serious alright" dr. elefun said in an unuseual,deathly tone. "DEAD serious."

(i should put a PG rating on this fan-fic really ^^; if you think its bad now,trust me,it gets worse...still,its all in the merry heart of making a faithful astroboy "endgame"/splatterhouse crossover,you know ^.^ hope you liked the tale of ezmarelda.hopefuly it wont keep you up at night >.^
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

The girl began to hover closer to the crowed, lots of frightened mumbling riveting through it.
Dr. Elefun stared at the apparition in pure shock, like he recognized her.
"I know you!" he shouted. “You’re-your- ezmarelda!!"
The girl lifted her head. Her expression was gaunt and sad, definitely fitting for a ghost.
"Help....me..." she said again in that same dead, emotionless voice. She tried reaching fowards, but without warning, a huge white light engulfed the room. When it had sub-sided, the girl was gone.
"Dr. Elefun..." harpy said, pointing one of her laser-blasters at him "explain!"
The doctor sighed, before sitting down, ready to explain everything.
"Over 500 years ago, in the year 2006....the first tool-robot was created by a man know as dr. heart-cross. He and his beautiful wife sandy, and their daughter, ezmarelda, who was 17 at the time, where living in a mansion far from any city. However, not known to the general public eye, they had a stow-away living in their shed. Dr. heart-cross' brother, who called himself Genie to avoid the authorities finding him, you see, Genie was a sadist, a psychopath, and a sckhitzophreniac, completely insane. He believes in the old ways of the occult, and before. Heart-cross hid him away for the sake of wanting protect family, he was a brutal serial killer of...well, virgin women. Presumably for sacrifices’ had kept most of them preserved for 5 years, under the floorboards of his shed, constently injecting them with preserving chemicals. He was planning something big, but nobody, not even his brother knew. But it soon became clear. He wanted to raise hell, for reasons people still don’t know. He just needed one more virgin sacrifice...and the only one close enough was his neice.he held no second thoughts or remose, and ultimately decided to go through with it. He waited for to come how one night, hiding under the sofa with a knife and a bottle to drain the blood into. She walked in, trying to be as quiet as she could so-as not to wake her parents. She sat down on the sofa her uncle was hiding under. Moment later he attacks, stabbing the backs of her legs so she couldn’t run away. He dragged her out to his shed, and finished the unholy job there and then. Obviously hearing their daughters frightened shrieks, her parents had heard her assaulted by her uncle, and ran out to the shed to kill him. He was already expecting this; however, as when dr. heart-cross ran into the shed in a blind fury, he ran face-first into an axe nailed to the ceiling. The terrified Mrs. heart-cross tried to escape back into the minion to call the authoriatys, but she never made it. Genie shot her with a blowgun before she even made it to the door.
With all the blood he needed, and plenty of corpses, he dragged every last one into the huge mansion and placed them all over it. He activated the evil curse, and brought some-form of supernatural creature to life in the house, as well as re-animating the gutted/limbless/bloodless corpses back to life, hungry for flesh. he tried to leave, but he never made it out of the door, he was pulled back in. the strangest part,though,was that he buried his brother at the back of the house, and left Esmeralda and Mrs. heart-cross in their rooms, completely lifelss.nobody knows why, but that was all that was left. Authorities went to check it out-never came back. Millions of campers/mindless kids have gone in their to prove they're bravery. Never come out again either. The government is too afraid of what might be in there, so they just leave it well enough alone." Dr. Elefun finished talking.
Pretty much all of us where in total shock, afraid, and felt naughtiest. This man was so sick and twisted; he killed his own family to achieve an empty dream? It makes no sense to me at all.
"Why are you telling us this” a nervous croon asked.
"Welkin going to send you all over there post haste. The place was known for being haunted for over 500 years, but has never interfered with the outside world. Now that it is, this can only mean trouble" dr. Elefun said. "BIG trouble."
All of us burst out in frightened gasps and angry shouts, understandably.
"You’re mad, completely mad!" I shouted out. Zeo was cowering next to me.
"You can’t be serious" she said, terror stricken.
"Oh im serious alright" Dr. Elefun said in a unuseual, deathly tone. "DEAD serious."


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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

thanks sparx =3what did you think of that part then?
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

It’s very bloody, but I like it that way. It’s good, keep it up.

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

yeah,like i said in another thread,i would'nt want to see blood in an official astroboy thing,but i dont mind it in fan-stuff or my own stuff.
and trust me,it gets much,much worse...*laughs evil*...er...*sips coffee* i really need to stop laughing manianicly,its killing my throte...
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

XD, I can't wait.

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Postby zeo » 19 years ago

some more should be up later...check back today and see =3
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

Ok, i'll back at about 5.00PM or some thing like that.


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