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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Can't wait! :D
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is part five of The Phantom Shadow VS Astro Boy & Boomer, hope you like it!:

“Astro,” said Boomer, “You got to stop being so, impatient! I know you want to find your family, but getting angry isn’t going to help you.” He looked over at Astro, and he saw that he looked depressed. “I’m sorry Astro,” said Boomer, “I guess I’m getting’ carried away.”
“Its alright, Boomer,” replied Astro, “ I guess I am getting to angry.” He turned to Dr. Elephant, “How are you doing?” he asked.
“I’m shocked. I cant believe there is another robot,” replied Dr. Elephant, “I wonder where she came from…”
He looked around and saw something looking at him, “What is that?” he said, he started to walk towards it, when it popped into the ground. “Ah, it must be a camera!” said Boomer, “They must be watching us.” He looked around to see if there where any other cameras. Than Astro found one behind a bush.
“Look,” whispered Astro, “There’s one.” With that he pounced onto it, “I got it!” he called.
“Dr. Elephant, do you think you could get a picture from this camera?” asked Boomer. By than it had become morning.
“Oh no!” cried Astro, “I’m late for school! I’ll be back as soon as I could.” And with that he started to fly towards school.
“ASTRO!” yelled Daddy Walrus, “What did I tell you about being late?” He was really red.
“I’m sorry sir, but my family has been kidnapped!”
The class gasped.
“What happened to them?” called Kenneth, one of his class mates.
“Yeah, what happened?” called Alvin, another class mate.
“Oh, I didn’t know robots got kidnapped!” said Theodore, at that one of the other kids smacked him in the head.
“Hey, hey,” called Daddy Walrus, “What’s all this about? Saying your family being kidnapped?”
“Its true!” called Boomer from behind Astro,
“How do you know?” asked Daddy Walrus.
“Because I was asked to help him find his family.” replied Boomer.
“Who are you anyways?” called Alvin, “Are you a friend of Astro’s?”
“Yes, I am.” replied Boomer, “And my name is Boomer, how do you do?” He held out his hand to shake hands with Alvin.
“Uh,” said Alvin, shocked that the robot was so smart. “Uh, I’m Alvin.” He looks like a human, thought Alvin.
In fact he did, He wore a green long sleeved shirt with another shorter shirt over it, and he wore brown shorts.
Just than someone started to knock on the door.
“Who can it be now?” grumbled Daddy Walrus. When he opened the door, he saw a ghostly figure, it was the Shadow again! And with her was Aimer.
“Put your hands In the air!” called Aimer. All of a sudden, Alvin started to laugh out loud.
“What are you? A cowboy?” asked Alvin, laughing.
Aimer turned as red as his shirt.
“Uh oh,” whispered Theodore, “I think you got him mad!” Everyone inched back in there chairs.
“You human will pay for this!” yelled Aimer, “Go get them, Phantom Shadow!” He said to the Shadow.
“Yes sir.” She said. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a water gun, probably filled with the potion that made Astro’s family disappear!
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Part six almost done. :) :astro:
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Postby Anime Girl » 15 years ago

Finally, I got the time to do part four. I swear, I was so busy last night. Anyway, enjoy.

Astro Boy and Jetter Mars vs. The Ghost Doll

PART FOUR

That night, Dr. Elefun, Jetter Mars, and his older sister Miri, came to Astro's house for dinner. Instantly, the conversation turned to Ghost Doll. Dr. Elefun was still worried about what trouble that the mysteriest robot could do.

"How could a robot be so evil?" wondered Miri as she twirled her fork around her spagetti.

"I don't know." admitted Dr. Elefun. "But I know that she wasn't always like that." he said looking upset.

Colbalt, Astro's clumsy younger brother, was confused. "Sir" he said, "How do you know about that robot?"

Uran, Astro's little sister, looked up from her dinner plate and asked, "Was she once a different robot or something? Tell us the truth."

"Well, you see, she once belonged to a robot scientist," Dr. Elefun explained. "He built her for her daughter, who is now deceased. The girl's name was Mimi-chan, and the name of the robot girl is lost to us now. But after Mimi's death, her father treated the robot girl as another daughter. Things were going perfect between the two, but a drunk driver and her dad got into a car wreck, leaving the robot girl an orphan. Shortly after that, an anti robots party member threw a hen grenade at her and destroyed her. She was taken away by a space monster, and remodeled as an evil ghost like girl. He made her a transforming robot able to make herself into any shape she wants. It's sad but true."

"But sir," said Astro, "I could tell by the look in her eyes that she isn't evil. It's true they were blinking bright red, but they did not look like anything bad. In fact, she looked upset."

"You know what", said Jetter, "I think Astro is on to something."

"Maybe" said Astro's mother "she was told to do bad things against her will."

"Oh, poor thing!" said Miri.

"That could possibly be true" said Dr. Elefun, "But she needs to be found soon, or else the alien monster might do something bad to her."

Uran, who was listening to the whole conversation, was thinking of how lonley that the poor girl must be. Maybe, she thought, she needs someone to be her friend.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

:D Nice!
Cant wait for more parts of your story. :)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Part six of:The Phantom Shadow VS Astro Boy & Boomer
Hope you like it. :)

As Phantom got ready to fire the gun, Boomer got an idea.
“Hey, Phantom!” he called, “Bet you can’t catch me!” He ran to an open window and stuck his tongue out at the Phantom.
Angered that he thought she would fall for it, she aimed at him, ready to fire. Just when she was going to shoot, Boomer flew out the window.
“If you think you can escape me, your wrong!” growled the Phantom. She flew out a closed window.
While Phantom went after Boomer, Aimer had ran to hide behind a desk, for cover.
“If I cant get the class, I’ll just have to get the teacher!” mumbled Aimer, “They all look pretty close to him.” Just like I was close to that doctor, thought Aimer,
“I’ll get even with him for not operating on me!” Wait a second! Thought Aimer, why is it so quiet? When he turned around, he saw something horrible! All the boy children where surrounding him! They had books, bags, and anything else they could use to hurt him!
“Lets get him!” yelled Alvin.
Shouts of “Yeah” and “Lets do it!” came from all the kids.
“Wait,” cried Astro. Even though Aimer had kidnapped his family, he didn’t want to break him, “Don’t hurt him!” He ran over to where they where trying to hit Aimer. Astro pulled some of the kids off of Aimer.
“Get away from me!” yelled Aimer. He ran to a widow and kicked it so he could fly out.
“You all go for help, I’ll go catch him!” called Astro, flying out the window that Aimer broke.
“Humph,” Said Alvin, “Leaving all the action for himself.” He looked to funny just standing there looking like a little kid that always got his way.
Theodore started to giggle. And soon the whole class was laughing with Alvin, even though he didn’t know they where laughing at him!
“Ok, enough laughing!” called Kenneth, “We have to go for help!”

All this time where was Daddy Walrus? At the police station, reporting the incident.
“I’m telling you there is a mad robot at the school!” yelled Daddy Walrus.
“Where’s the proof?” asked Inspector Gumshoe. Just when Daddy Walrus was going to blow up, Inspector Gumshoe and he heard a big boom.
“What’s going on here?!” yelled Inspector Gumshoe, to one of the other police men.
“Up there,” cried a police man, “Its two robots fighting!” The fighting robots where Boomer and Phantom!
“Ah, my energy is giving out!” cried Boomer, “I can barely fly.” He started to fly lower and lower. He flew to a tall pine tree and held on tight.
Phantom, thinking it was the perfect time to shoot him while he was being distracted by trying to hold on to the tree, got ready to shoot. Jeez, this water gun isn’t as light as I thought it would be! Thought Phantom. She started to shoot when a rock came hurling towards the gun and knocked it out of her hands. It was Astro!
“You wont get away with this!” yelled Aimer.
“Don’t worry,” said Phantom with a evil laugh, “I’ll take care of them both!” with that she pulled out a water balloon, and aimed for Inspector Gumshoe.
Oh yeah, a distraction! Thought Aimer. Getting ready to help Phantom, he saw something on the ground.
He gasped, a car crash, a bus had hit another one.
Being reminded about what happened to him, he flew to the crash.
“Help me!” called a little voice. Aimer moved towards the voice, “Where are you?!” cried Aimer, looking around.
“Over here.” the voice cried. He went over to the sound and saw that it was coming from the back of one of the buses.
“Just stay calm!” he called to the voice, “I’ll get you out as soon as I could!” He tore open the back door, and was shocked at what he found. He had found a little girl being squished by luggage!
“Where are your parents?” cried Aimer, helping her out of the pile.
“I don’t have any parents.” replied the little girl, panting, “Thank you for helping me. By the way who are you?” She squinted at him to get a better look. By then an ambulance had arrived.
“Um, I got to go now, You better get yourself cheeked out.” said Aimer, avoiding the question. Just when he was about to leave a black car parked next to them. And out came a guy with a dark cape and dark cloths, and his hair was partly white. Aimer gasped. That's the doctor that wouldn’t operate on me before, Black Jack! thought Aimer.
“Doc!” called the little girl cheerfully, she ran to him and hugged him.
“I’m glad you’re safe, Pinoco.” said Black Jack. He looked around and saw Aimer. He looked shocked.
“She’s your daughter?!” asked Aimer, shocked.
“I’m not his daughter,” yelled Pinoco, “I’m his wife!”
Huh? Thought Aimer, she must be crazy.
While Aimer was saving Pinoco, Astro and Phantom had started to fight.
“I don’t want to hurt you, Phantom!” cried Astro, barely missing getting hit by Phantoms laser beam.
“You where ordered to kill me, weren’t you?” asked Phantom. Pointing a finger at him.
“I was never ordered to hurt you!” Astro replied.
“Oh? Then why did you shoot me down?!” yelled Phantom. Than her eyes started to blink red. And she started to act like a computer.
“I never…” Astro started to say, when he realized that the Phantom eyes looked like Astra’s!
Could the Phantom be Astra?

Part seven, coming soon.
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Postby Anime Girl » 15 years ago

OMG! Black Jack! Pinoko! (passes out of starstruckness) I'm sorry, but you gotta love the Tezuka Star System! :)
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Postby AprilSeven » 15 years ago

It's so great reading the fanfic -- but between all the different versions/names I sometimes feel like I'm reading a Russian novel!

-- and actually Tezuka was a FAN of those -- so there ya go!

Keep it coming!! One of these days I'll write my "masterpiece" that's been in the works since the 60's!

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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Yup, Black Jack. :D And Pinoco. :lol:
Changed my signature into Black Jack. :p
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Postby Anime Girl » 15 years ago

Well since I got some more time on my hands, here's part 5

Astro Boy and Jetter Mars vs. The Ghost Doll

PART FIVE

Although Ghost Doll was happy to leave the lair of Hooter, she was very scared. What if Hooter found me? she thought, What if he activated the neutron bomb? But, nevertheless, she knew she would feel better once she left Hooter for good. As she walked on, she realized that this was the first time she actually saw how beautiful the outside was. She hoped that she could make new friends.

She remembered the human girl she used to be friends with. The scientist who made her, Dr. Saski, had once had a little girl who was diagnossed with leukemia when she was seven years old. Her name was Mitsuko Soyoko Saski, but she was always called Mimi-chan. When Mimi was in the hospital, she made a special request for her dad to do. She wanted a robot twin sister, since none of her friends were allowed to visit her. Thus Melmo was created. She was the spitting image of Mimi. The two got along as if they have grown up together their whole lives. Melmo was different than Mimi in many ways, though. Mimi liked lavander, Melmo liked pink. Mimi always wore bows, Melmo chooses headbands. Finally, Mimi died at age ten. Mimi's dad treated Melmo as another daughter, and grew to love her almost as much as his Mimi. Then came the tragic accidents, which turned Melmo into a nGhost Doll. She hoped that she would be herself again.

Melmo stopped at a house down the road. Out side of the house, was a young girl robot, in a pink outfit, kicking a soccor ball. The girl was, of course, Uran, just about ready to go to the park to play ball with her friends.

"Hurry up Uran!" said Astro, "It's time to go to the park!"

"OK!" Uran replied, "I'll be right there. I just need to get my bike."

"We'll meet you at the park." said Miri.

"Don't be too late Uran." said Jetter.

"I'll meet you guys there!" said Uran. Then she stopped and saw Melmo on the sidewalk of the house. "Oh, hello." said Uran. "Who are you?"

"Hello" said Melmo, happy to make a new friend. "My name is Melmo. What's yours?"

"I'm Uran-chan, but many of my friends call me Astro Girl!" said Uran proudly. She has the power to speak to animals and, like her older brother, she has super strength, which for that reason, has earned her the nickname Astro Girl. She is an obvious tomboy and proud of it.

As Melmo looked closer, she noticed something. "Hey, you look almost just like me."

Uran noticed it too "You're right! We almost be sisters. Ha Ha Ha Ha." They indeed, both looked similar, except that Melmo's hair is more browner than Uran's, and she had a couple of springy curls in a few places.

"You wanna go play soccer with me and my friends?" asked Uran.

"Sure, I'd love to." said Melmo, "Are we going to the park?"

"You bet!" said Uran. "Let's go!"

And the two of them walked hand-in hand to go to the park. Melmo was happy that making friends was easy.

(Log on later to see part six. Don't get too comfortable, the story isn't over yet)
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