The Writing Game!

[Astro Forever]

Astro looked at Dr. O'Shay, his sad wide eyes observing him carefully. "TOBIO!!!", yelled Dr. Tenma. Tenma turned to O'Shay, furious. O'Shay's heart missed a bit, but watching the little robot, he carefully approached him, and told him gently, "Astro, Astro... I know you have not forgotten me... we lived so many adventures together!" Astro did not know what to think, but it triggered a feeling inside him...

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

"but, but i dont know who you are?" Astro said. This made Dr. O'shae's heart sink. "Tobio! Be quiet!" Tenma yelled and started to drive off. Astro overpowered the control that had kept him with Tenma and jumped out of the car "NO!" Astro yelled....

[Novacain]

"I - I..." he began, but an electrical pain seared in his head. Astro grabbed both side of his temples. "I... remember now," he managed to sputter, leading himself away from Tenma's coax. Despite the jolts of pain he felt, Astro found the courage to...

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Run to Dr. O'shae. He grabbed O'shae tight but was careful not to hurt him. The pain surged through him he gribbed to the doctor as he slowly started to fall to his knees. "Save me from him doctor" Astro muttered as he began to black out "Please make the pain go away" Astro started to cry out. "Please stop Tenma you gave me kokoro you cant just take it away!" Astro screamed as he was laying on the ground holding his head. Tenma didn't like to see Astro in so much pain, he would never wish that on his creation so he...

[Novacain]

When will the winner be declaired X.X

When the stories over duh

Now, now! Not all the stories have come to an end so far. Though I have a pretty good feeling this current one will....

I also hereby declare that if too much time goes on between new posts we must use the suspense theme "don don dddoonn!" as a single post to remind the team of superb fiction writers!

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Okay good idea

[Astro Forever]

I'm fine with your suggestion, Novacain. I'm a bad fiction writer though so I'm not sure I want to be the one ending this story, I'm afraid I'll spoil it, which would pain me because it's a good one... I'll give it a try though.. If it's not right add something!

Run to Dr. O'shae. He grabbed O'shae tight but was careful not to hurt him. The pain surged through him he gribbed to the doctor as he slowly started to fall to his knees. "Save me from him doctor" Astro muttered as he began to black out "Please make the pain go away" Astro started to cry out. "Please stop Tenma you gave me kokoro you cant just take it away!" Astro screamed as he was laying on the ground holding his head. Tenma didn't like to see Astro in so much pain, he would never wish that on his creation so he...

.... felt something good inside him, a feeling he had not felt in years. He recognized that as his love for Tobio. His hard feelings melted, and, remorseful, he opened Astro's chest, pressed a few buttons, and Astro opened his eyes to recognize both of his fathers.

[I kind of want to hide under my desk, lol! ]

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Ahh thats a great ending ps the only thing fiction writing really takes is imagination and a alot of detail and you seem good at that

[Novacain]

I'm fine with your suggestion, Novacain. I'm a bad fiction writer though so I'm not sure I want to be the one ending this story, I'm afraid I'll spoil it, which would pain me because it's a good one... I'll give it a try though.. If it's not right add something!

No way! That's perfect. The only difference is I would have made it so a glitch in Astro shorted out something in Tenma's brain and he would have been dancing around like a rooster on caffeine. But you know me...

Ahh thats a great ending ps the only thing fiction writing really takes is imagination and a alot of detail and you seem good at that

I agree, you have a very good style of language art!

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Okay now we just have to lay back and wait for I-Am-Atom's-Sister to pick a winner so we can start a new one